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Bedlam

Short fiction

Maria Blackman
3 min readSep 23, 2020
Ecce Homo, attributed to Hieronymous Bosch, Creative Commons Licence

A suburb, somewhere in Australia
1984

This place was bedlam, a nightmare worthy of Hieronymous Bosch.

I felt a pull of resistance but it was too weak and too late. I was drawn in among the madness; I would have to fortify my soul and endure it.
We were ordered to line up for the sake of efficiency, although it was hardly the quick and ruthless bureaucracy of a Nazi work camp. Instead, the system of ordering that we plebeian folk were shuffled into was based on a seemingly random game of numbers. As I stood in line (another score of desperates already arrived behind me) I craned my neck this way and that, trying to see the lights that signalled the end of the tunnel. But it was impossible — there were flashing lights everywhere, accompanied by a low drone interrupted only by an incessant siren.

As I stood there turning and craning, my preceding neighbour in this unfortunate mess caught my attention.

His eyes were wide and wild.

What are you looking at?

I looked down and murmured, nothing, sorry.

Again, louder. What are ya looking at?

I could feel the people nearest to me stiffening, retracting.

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Maria Blackman
Maria Blackman

Written by Maria Blackman

Writer and artist from Perth, Western Australia. I write about art, books, identity and more. Find me on Twitter @blackman_maria

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